Revision Post - Plot

      The original idea for the plot of my film was rather static. It was a typical corporate scene of powerful men coming together and arguing over ideas to fight a common enemy, there was no vested interest as it was just talking back and forth the majority of the animation with no fluid difference. The only time that ever came was where an outside sourced called one of the characters timing it towards conveniently around the time the main topic was finished. The main topic was also an issue, the wording was long and understanding the concept was also long, there was no real characterization as the characters kept a professional sense that aided in it's static production. There was a need to rehash the plot.

     This came to more of a radical change to the original. It centralized among a more prominent change which viewers would be able to see with one of the characters, one of the prominent as well, becoming injured and unable to operate their usual power in the plot. It had caused a vacuum where certain of the members were gathering with each other to try and take advantage of the power vacuum with their position. They were also made more characterized, saying their incentives and vested interests throughout the conversation, pertaining to a more generalized topic where ideas could be spread without so much of a specific, or even a difficult to come up with idea, like increasing profit. The only thing that didn't really change from this new pace was the end portion where the outside force would contact the character you follow with in this story. However, his wording is designed to come off more menacingly, foreboding. The response to what's to come still remains, but more of an idea for what it might be do come to light in this newly rehashed plot.