Third Rendition of Script

In my efforts to make a shorter script to cut down on time. I had decided to cut out 3 of the characters. Although, 2 of them are referenced in this script. This decision was also made to help focus on some of the other characters as well. This script also rearranges the entire situation, where those high in power are hiding among others as they create plots of their own. Due to how drawn out and frankly dull I would say was in the transitioning of the old script, I would say this would be a better, more engaging outcome for the animation.

“Inner Corrosion (Title In progress)” By Damoy Tindel

Fade In:

NEPTUNE

A crowded area of technology, where large screens are displayed, reporting upon the accident of Frohd Bek. Vallus Dral stands before one of these screens, staring off at the reporting.

Reporter

The Unfortunate Injury of Frohd Bek has disabled him to continue acting as chairman of the board. Vice Chairman, Veul Sodern, had come out to reassure everyone earlier that there’s nothing to worry about…//

Vallus Dral

//Tsk

An Empty Store with many tables. A group of men sit at one table, all donning the same equipment as they converse privately.

Tikel

As you already know, Gentlemen, Frohd Bek has become hospitalized.

Votte

That Nef Anyo has already taken the opportunity to use that puppet Veul.

Aine Nem

Frohd Bek was a fool to think the Tenno could be used.

 Vallus Dral

Unpredictable Risks are unreasonable.

Tikel

You almost missed the meeting.

Vallus Dral

A contact of mine had kept me busy.

Aine Nem

So, will we make the Tenno answer for this?

Tikel

Working against them gets us killed, trying to use them gets us killed. What do you think?

Votte

Frohd’s supporters are still in power, if we intend to do anything, it’s best to get the will of the people first.

Tikel

This is why security is an absolute must for improvement, otherwise events like this can spiral in the end.

Vallus Dral

Do you plan to use the Tenno as an excuse for this plan?

Votte

It would be better than just allowing Nef Anyo anymore power.

Aine Nem

          Are you willing Vallus? You would be repaying the Corpus all those investments you lost due to Eris’s fall.

Vallus Dral

Eris's fall is why I don't choose sides.

Tikel

You can’t stay Neutral forever, Vallus.

Vallus Dral

…I know. Now if you excuse, I’ll be return to my office. (Puts helmet back on)

The dark confines of an alleyway. It’s extremely clean yet laced with hardly any lighting.

Hunhow

The fact you’re contacting me means you finally come to understand your people’s predicament.

 Vallus Dral

To combat the Tenno, you referred to a… siege weapon?

 Hunhow

Seems I was truly right. Now, where to begin?

Fade Out:

the end